Remain concerned over the only One with a judgment that counts, and when you feel inclined to place too much emphasis on the others turn to Him for Comfort. (Ps.55:20)
This most expertly reveals the emotion you've meant to express.
I applaud the courage that yields art so close to the bone.
Perhaps the awkward and discomforting are simply mirrored in the piece itself, and your discontent with the way it turned out is necessary to the mood you are trying to communicate(?) I do see your point regarding the eyes; however, adding more might cause the piece to seem even more unsettling – maybe that’s a good thing. I like that it’s moody and estranged. The unrefined sketching and ripped scraps of the eyes adds to this greatly - good choice. And there’s an overall insecurity in how the picture itself seems somehow to be unfinished. Thank you for putting it up.